#20 - 019 - in Pirate Days

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Author Note

Amy Of Darkness

Amy Of Darkness Amy Of Darkness said:

It's the final page of this chapter! If you're still reading, thank you for sticking around. After this chapter, there's gonna be a bit of a change of pace, and new characters will arrive. Unlike my original run, they'll actually get proper intros instead of just "BAM hey I'm in the comic now". As of now I haven't yet decided on the update schedule, but I wanted this chapter up in one go.

1st Jun 2021, 7:33 PM

Comments

Werewolfsbane

Werewolfsbane Werewolfsbane

Wow King Samrick is huge! At first I thought that was a scorpion or spider on his chair, I thought Samrick was maybe a quarter of his actual size.

This was a good introductory chapter, I think the highlight for me was his rampage on the ship, I like how quickly he adapted to the whole vampire thing and couldn’t hold back his like, smug glee at being able to get back at them after all those years. Also I like his foresight in killing them before drinking their blood, I was worried he’d end up accidentally creating a crew of vampire pirates and end up back at square one, lol.

1st Jun 2021, 10:53 PM

Amy Of Darkness

Amy Of Darkness Amy Of Darkness

Hehe, those cape tendrils certainly do give that effect. :D "What's that arachnid on your chair-- oh pardon, it's a vampire!" XD Yeah Sammy's a big guy, the original version didn't even properly show the scale because the panel with his fingers was the only frame of reference in it! I was finishing these pages in a day at the time though, so I can only be *so* harsh on my past self.

Thank you so much for the comments, I can't even properly express to you how delighted I was to read them! Oh yes, "Smug glee" is the perfect way to describe it, I love that! I'm really glad to hear you felt it was a good intro, starting out is always the hardest part. I'd once had complaints that the original intro didn't properly set up expectations and took that feedback into consideration with this reworked version.

2nd Jun 2021, 4:12 PM

Werewolfsbane

Werewolfsbane Werewolfsbane

^_^ I also really like how it sets up the upcoming chapters by revealing that Charby has not just been relating the story to the audience, but another character, so it establishes that he’s already in a new location with new characters that we’ll get to see more of as time goes on, it’s a good hook. (Pun not intended now that I think about it, lol)

2nd Jun 2021, 5:18 PM

Jason Moon

Jason Moon Jason Moon

Glad to see you on comicfury Amy*

2nd Jun 2021, 10:51 AM

Amy Of Darkness

Amy Of Darkness Amy Of Darkness

Oh hey dude! Glad to see you here too! :D

2nd Jun 2021, 3:54 PM

Guest

Guest Guest

great stuff so far!

3rd Jun 2021, 8:37 PM

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